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The Road (Rewrite)

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Gravity erased itself from the world,
as I wrapped my poetry around your hand.

My soul finally floated up, out of me,
while you drifted into the stars.

We are two impure spirits caught up in the universe,
riding to another galaxy.
We are convinced this is the road
that leads to eternity.

But we have let nothingness entangle us,
and we have let perfection escape us.
And we have finally realized that
the past was beautiful as it was.

This is not the road to eternity.
No, this is the road to our agony.
We have let nothingness entangle us.
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So this is a little something I conjured up when I went through a few of my old poems! Here is the original: The Road 
I think I've improved a lot and so I've decided to rewrite some poems more often, it's actually a ton of fun! :D
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Faewning's avatar
This is really nicely done. I love how the poem even seems to be drifting away as you read it. :heart: